Liar

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Nice, but kind of sad poem.
- 8/23/2010 4:29 AM
- C_L_O_G
@C_L_O_G - Thank you, too much stuff bouncing around in my head lately. =/ First attempt at poetry in about 9 years...
@walking_a_long_lonely_road - You did a good job for a first attempt in nine years. Much better than I could have done.
- 8/23/2010 5:45 AM
- C_L_O_G
past tense. ?
- 8/23/2010 8:19 AM
- plantinthewindow
Lying in a relationship. I just can't tolerate that. Good poem.
@C_L_O_G - Thank you, English is my worst subject, haha
@ofunlo - in a way yes, the present looking back on the relationship and realizing all the lies..
@MidwesternShenanigansIN - Thank you. Lying, I can't stand it either...I was sad when I wrote this so that is how it sounds, but thinking about the lies actually makes me angry...

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